Anna Graham

Hey jasmine12! I think you've got a great thing going here. It's an interesting plot, and I'd love to read more. There are a few things I've noticed, though. You ...

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If someone told me that if you did something hard enough your sorrows couldn't break through I'd believe it. What I wonder today, reading this thick, satisfying novel, is if ...

I really like it! You described the ocean perfectly, in my eyes. I especially liked the line "Serenity is found in crashing waves." Beautiful. It's great as an opening line. ...

I completely agree! You include some great synonyms that really add to the piece and help put across the main idea. There are a few rough spots, but all in ...

Summer can not be 2/3 over! That means I have less than a month to finish both The Chosen and Lord of the Flies, along with a reading journal for ...

In this exercise we were told to pick ten words: A place we love something in the house a verb an adjective something you see when you look up something ...

Oh boy! The earliest story I recall was in sixth grade. I think we were supposed to be writing tall tales or something... anyway, i wrote this long thing about ...

I play the trumpet! It's the best! My favorite genre would probably be fantasy, although I've been known to pick up a history or science fiction every once and awhile. ...

When Truth comes like a black and white checkerboard, like the painful slice of reality that grows with every birthday; When Truth comes like a slap in the face with ...

You've got some good advice here. All I can say is that it seems to me you're bouncing around a little. It made it confusing and difficult to follow your ...

I agree. This is an interesting topic, and I think you could elaborate a bit. Maybe give some examples or something. Otherwise, I think it's a great idea. It's simple, ...

I gotta say, this poem was perfect for me. You've managed to write something I've been trying to convey for a long time! Thanks! As for the ugly thing, you're ...

Hi guys! I was surfing the internet and found this place. It's awesome! I hope I can learn more about writing and help others love writing as much as I ...